Unfinished fic #2

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This is where I'll be posting unfinished fics that I'm not planning to complete, along with plot summaries and author's notes. Please don't ask me to finish them; I've made up my mind. They're just here for you to enjoy, and for me to not feel like my work has been a complete waste of time. xD

So this one was originally supposed to be a foursome fic with Marc and Nathan (ilovemarcandnathan on Youtube; they guest-starred in this Lunchtime: www.youtube.com/watch?v=wrXFOR… ). But then my Ian/Anthony/Marc/Nathan OT4 was replaced by Iphanthony, so I never finished the fic. A lot of ideas from unwritten parts of this fic actually went on to become part of Fast And Slow, especially Ian and Anthony's personalities (although they're a little sluttier and a little less nice in this fic than in Fast And Slow). So yeah, here it is! There's a lot of breaks in the writing, because that's how I normally write my bigger projects; I kind of jump around from scene to scene to write my most developed ideas and then fill in the blanks afterwards. I'll add notes in the gaps to tell you what should've happened there, though!

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It all started when Marc found the note on their doorstep.

"What the fuck is this?" he'd murmured as he came back inside. Nathan had looked up from his laptop.

"What is it, babe?" he asked, holding his hand out. Marc had handed the note to him wordlessly.

Nathan had studied the paper. Handwritten letters spelled out a simple message: Nathan: Come to the park down the street at 8PM tonight. Bring your boyfriend. Dress nice. We'll be waiting.

There was no signature. Nathan's heart had pounded as he'd read the note over and over again. Bring your boyfriend. Only a handful of people knew that he and Marc were dating, most of them close friends or family members. Was someone playing a prank on them?

"What do you think?" Marc had asked, sitting down beside him on the couch.

Nathan had paused for a second to consider it. Something about the wording of the note was a little ominous, but a feeling of excitement had coursed through him. He was always up for a little adventure, so he'd turned to Mark, kissed him, and said, "let's do it."

[The next scene involved Marc and Nathan going down to the park, where Ian and Anthony would sneak up behind them and blindfold them, and kidnap them in a sexy way, like with lots of rubbing up against them and whispering in their ears and whatnot. They'd get them into a car and then remove the blindfolds, and Marc and Nathan would be kind of starstruck because they'd only met Ian and Anthony a few times beforehand and they really looked up to them. See where the Fast And Slow inspiration was coming from? This next (barely written) scene takes place in the car, as Ian and Anthony are taking Marc and Nathan to a club.]

Ian turned around in the passenger seat to grin at them. "Feel free to do whatever you want back there, guys. We really don't mind." His smirk said enough to make both of them blush. Marc ducked his head, grinning embarrassedly. Nathan just laughed, hoping it sounded natural.

"Not yet, huh? Just wait until we get some alcohol into you guys," Ian said, lowering his sunglasses to wink at them. Nathan had a perfect view as Ian reached over and slid his hand up Anthony's leg, slipping out of view just as it reached the top of his thigh.

"Mmm, yeah," Anthony murmured, and Nathan could make a pretty good guess to where Ian's hand had ended up.

[I hadn't really planned out the club scene much; I mostly just had vague ideas of drinking and dancing, especially Ian and Anthony dancing sexily together, and maybe pulling Marc and Nathan onto the dance floor so that they could grind up on them and stuff. The Ian and Anthony I had in mind for this fic were really slutty. In a good way, of course. The next scene takes place in the car after Marc and Nathan are slightly drunk and Ian and Anthony are driving them home from the club. Anthony and Marc are in the back seat, while Nathan is sitting up front with Ian. Ian's driving, and also has his hand on Nathan's thigh, teasing him a little bit.]

"Hey, Nathan," Anthony's voice said cheerfully from the backseat. "Mind if I borrow your boyfriend for a while?"

"Yeah, sure," Nathan murmured, only half-aware of what he was agreeing to. Ian's hand felt so good on his leg that he was lightheaded; all the blood in his body was rushing downward, and fast.

He heard movement from the backseat, a gasp, and a soft moan. He looked over his shoulder and couldn't help letting out a little groan of his own; Anthony was kissing Marc.

He wasn't jealous. How could he be, when he'd fantasized about kissing Anthony more times than he could count? Or when he was half-hard from Ian's light, teasing touches? Marc kissing Anthony just added to his arousal.

Ian looked over at him, smirking. "Our boyfriends seem to be a little busy back there," he said, his voice low and seductive as his fingers traced patterns along Nathan's inner thigh. "How about we have a little fun of our own?"

"Right now?" Nathan asked. As turned on as he was, he didn't want to die in a car accident quite this early in life.

Ian just grinned. "I've had a lot of practice driving with one hand."

[Never got around to writing the smutty part, lmfao. Ian gives Nathan a handjob, obviously.]

"That's enough for now," Ian said, grinning. Nathan looked over his shoulder to see Anthony pulling away, leaving Marc flushed and, if the bulge in his pants was any indication, incredibly aroused.

"For now?" Nathan echoed.

Anthony smiled at him; the most seductive smile he's ever seen. "I guess we should have mentioned our intentions for the evening."

"Intentions?" Marc asked.

Ian took his eyes off the road and turned around to smirk at him. "We're taking both of you guys home with us tonight."

[That's all I have for writing, but here's the notes I wrote regarding the actual smut scene: Ian blows Nathan, Anthony fucks Marc, Ian fucks Nathan, Ian and Anthony stop when Marc and Nathan are getting close, Ian and Anthony make out, Ian fingers Nathan while Nathan fucks Marc while Marc blows Anthony, Ian fucks Anthony, Nathan fucks Marc, they all cuddle. You know, just in case you were curious to what would've happened. xD]

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So yeah, that's what most of these unfinished fics will probably be like. The first one I posted just happened to be completely written up to the point where I stopped, but most of them will probably have little breaks like that for notes/scene summaries. I hope you enjoy them anyway!
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'Ian blows Nathan, Anthony fucks Marc, Ian fucks Nathan, Ian and Anthony stop when Marc and Nathan are getting close, Ian and Anthony make out, Ian fingers Nathan while Nathan fucks Marc while Marc blows Anthony, Ian fucks Anthony, Nathan fucks Marc, they all cuddle.'

Holy shit, that's a really confusing foursome. XD

But this whole plot sounds sexy.
Like, really sexy.
Ian and Anthony's characters here... are just... wow. ;w;
They just sound really fucking hot for some reason.
I don't know why.
Maybe they sound kind of insane or evil or something.
Obviously less nice than the Ian and Anthony in your main story right now xD
But hot.
Okay.

I don't think this even needs to be finished to be amazing owo; It's just ajdfkshdg fantastic~ :heart: